[Snake]

0 willpower will bring FP problems, lol. Make it 0 RES instead of 0 WIL.
Also, extra Aptitude is for Mechanations/Humans only. Because they get no 'neat bonuses' for being common.
The melee damage return should be at MA skills/Fists only. (Even though, some fists are protected, so here's it.)
(Sorry if this is not the place to post it.)